Please...
It has always been about you
Every time, It's not me but you...
You always had it your way,
And I never had any say...
Still...
Why is it hard to accept me as I am,
When all I ask you is to just feel.
And please don't say 'U give a damn'...
As this is one thing with which you have to deal.
Please don't ask me to bury my past,
So that we can have a future
If I do it I will be just a Miscast
And our relation... A Falling Structure...
5 comments:
its good..although i think soemthing else instead of falling structure..would have made it more appealing ..!!
I echo with Prathyusha, its very good especially the flow,,
falling structure,, hmm may be broken literature or unpleasant picture,, i dont know...
but good ones aravind (sledger),, keep em coming...
Nice one.. but even I agree with your friends above..
Falling structure??
Thanx all...
the line our reln vl b a 'Falling structure" Why??
cos,
the relation is under great strain and i wudn like to lose tat relation so protagonist is askin the person if v dn mend it soon it will be like a fallen structure which is difficul to be restored :)
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